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| Subject: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:27 am | |
| These are my oldest poems from when I was 13, which was over y'now 10 years ago... Havnt really writen since, thinkin bout it tho.
The Sun
Morning light shone through the sky, penetrating the deep darkness of a deep burrow. It broke through all of the darkness's defenses and crept through the cracks and crevices, iluminating them, waking the living and mourning the victims of a night creature's hunt. |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:41 am | |
| The Earth
Cracking, crumbling. Its anger of what humans are doing to it barely contained. It cries with sorrow from the horrors we have caused. Global warming, fires, nuclear wars and fighting are its main threats. It doesn’t want to lose the battle of life.
Be careful what you wish for. |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:51 am | |
| The Cold
Creeping through the land, searching for potential victims to feel its icy-frostbitten touch. Searching everywhere it can, feeling, always feeling for a weak soul it can take, watching, always watching for the sun, which ends its reign of terror for another night.
Is it just me, or is there a theme here?? |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:16 am | |
| Its Over
As I lie on my bed, I think about you, me, us and what once was. It seemed right, then turned wrong. Hearts broke, life made miserable. Thoughts collided, love ended, hate began. White turned to black, black turned to a grey mist of sorrow. Everyone was oblivious, they all knew, no-one helped. I was a solitary figure in life, never moving forwards, only backwards, losing everything i had. All because of those two words, the killing words that break hearts, lives, dreams and drive you to madness. Those two little words, ended everything good. Those two words- Its Over. |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:29 am | |
| Various Shades of Black and Grey
Waves of darkness fly through me, breaking down my walls, crushing my defences. Various shades of black and grey flood into my mind, consuming me, eating away at my willpower. Why must they force this upon me?? Why must they torment and ravage my soul?? It feels like the hounds of hell are attacking me, pulling me further away from humanity. The ones who brought this upon me must be punished, and they will be. They must suffer what I have suffered, they must share my pain. Life has no use for me, it never has. I feel like I am being pulled into a black whirlpool. The only person I listen to and notice is the one I love, have always loved and will always love. They can pull me out from the darkest depths of my mind, even if they don’t know they can, even if I just hear their voice. But they do not love me, not the way I love them, probably not even at all.
That I Know.
Yes, I did say 13. |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:30 am | |
| What a strange young teen I was... |
| | | Lady Queen Of A^P
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Mon Jul 19, 2010 7:50 am | |
| Lol i like them... i think everyone was a strange young teen lol |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:28 am | |
| Yeah lol Least I wasnt out tagging and stuff... |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Wed Jul 21, 2010 6:28 am | |
| Actually I think I may have been |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:47 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: My Oldies Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:01 am | |
| Thanks. Lol that is a sweet as sig man. Especially the um, whast it called... .. .. Um, i dunno. Ill just say the words underneath. |
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